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Snow Sage Reviews
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11-02-2010, 10:50 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-02-2010 10:50 PM by LordSnowSage.)
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Snow Sage Reviews
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Story Name: Rating (1-10) Strengths: Weaknesses: ![[Image: mwv8r7.png]](http://i48.tinypic.com/mwv8r7.png) "Smegy's one of those people who seem serious, but is nice at times, just don't piss him off to a point he'll use a serrated toothbrush to murder you." - Hekutaa in Inter-Nexus Agency. |
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12-02-2010, 11:21 PM
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RE: Snow Sage Reviews
Story Name: [MA-16/Hiatus] The Inter-Nexus Agency Saga: Darkstalker's Tale
Rating: 6 at the moment, will revise when finished. Strengths: Powerful imagery, an interesting story so far and is well written for the most part Weaknesses: There are several spelling errors and grammatical errors that you should probably look for, I suggest a good proof read as some sentences don't read as well as they could. Also I feel it can get a bit too descriptive at times, for example every single person has their clothes detailed which for some makes sense, but others seems a bit out of place. Overall I can't wait to read the rest as its getting quite interesting so will be looking for the next part. ![[Image: smegyjagged2.png]](http://www.t3hclan.co.uk/smegs_stuff/forum/sigs/smegyjagged2.png)
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